This is a complete 40/40 mark article answer that I wrote for my Year 11 mocks. Along with the answer, I’ve included an annotated version 📌 to show what I did well and how you can improve your own writing. To make it even more helpful, I’ve added specific advice to guide you.
 
Here’s what one viewer said: "Henry you got me from a 5 in the mock to a 9 in English Language—I'm shook!" 🎉
 
Let this resource help you achieve your best.